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Through the dark and through the tears
I met you in the Hall of Mirrors

I didnít know you at all before
And now I seem to all the more

Your past, your present and your future
A story of time to hold and treasure

Of hopes and dreams lost and gained
Of fears and scars all sustained

A life that's neither good nor bad
A life of confusion that drives you mad

And somewhere along the journeys way
I notice our likeness day to day

And without thinking who is who
I realize; you are me and I am you

Complete with all my faults and fears
I found myself in the Hall of Mirrors
I never submitted a piece of poetry before so I thought I might try it out and submit a poem I wrote about self realization. Yesh.
Edit: sorry, just realized a few mistakes cuz I was rushed when I did it. :XD:
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adinablack Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007
Very nice. Favourites :D
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adinablack Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007
Very nice. Favourites :D
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EternalBombnatioN Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2006
I really loved this poem. This will always be one of my personal favorites. ^.^
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chamzi Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2006
Aww Thank you! I love it too, mostly cuz it really ment something to me when I was writing it. :hug:
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raven-is-my-name-tt Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2005   Writer
Wow...Just wow I really like!!:+fav:
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hatredtheblack Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
That's so clever and so expressive! I love it! I really hope to read more of your poetry in the future.
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AnawielDewdrop Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is absolutly beautiful, i love the imagry and you rhmed it well, i admire you for that, i really can't rhyme my stuff. the way you used the tittle in the first and last stanza really brought it full cicle and rounded it up well. you should write poetry more often, you're really good at it
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chamzi Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005
Aw, thanks!
Perhaps one day I shall, but this is only the 3rd poem I'v ever done in my 17 years of life so it maybe very scars when I do submit poetry, but really Thank you!
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AnawielDewdrop Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are very welcome, well done :w00t:
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the-fallen-raven13 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2005
You can draw and write! Way to go chamzi! :thumbsup:
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FlyingFelix Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005
Wow. This comes on a very fortuitous time for me, as I am in the Hall of Mirrors myself. Thanks.
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Side-ways17 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005
GOT IT!!!!!.....................that took me a while........
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chamzi Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005
lol, took my best friend forever! well technically I told him cuz he's like "Who is that other person? Me?" I'm like "um... Logan... Hall of Mirrors..." and he like "OHHH! I get it! wow!" :XD:
Thanks!
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Side-ways17 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005
wow thats awesome. so its about ur life only reflecting on the hall of mirrors?lol it takes me a while to figure poetry out so forgive me on that. overall it was really kool
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RavenLupinaRoth Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005
So beautifu! My favourite is the: "A story time to hold and treasure." eally pretty! *+fav*
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lightanddarklove Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:wow: Amazing, just totally love it... much better then my crappy poetry (yea, if you wanna see for yourself then go here lightanddarklove.deviantart.com)... Beautifully written. Faving it.
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craZy18gurl Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005  Professional Interface Designer
That is really beautiful, great work!
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tomboy68 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005
waaa!! that's awesome!! you should write poetry more often! :D
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Vertual-Being02 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005  Student General Artist
tis cool, i like it. AND it rhymes! good job
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shadow-cat17 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005
"And without think who is who
I realize; you are me and I am you"

that's my favorite part, I love how this flowed it's beautiful.
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xdarkestlightx Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005
dude...that is so awesome! you are an awesome poetry writer!
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x-Terra-x Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2005
dude now THAT is poerty! :D :D
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