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Through the dark and through the tears
I met you in the Hall of Mirrors

I didnít know you at all before
And now I seem to all the more

Your past, your present and your future
A story of time to hold and treasure

Of hopes and dreams lost and gained
Of fears and scars all sustained

A life that's neither good nor bad
A life of confusion that drives you mad

And somewhere along the journeys way
I notice our likeness day to day

And without thinking who is who
I realize; you are me and I am you

Complete with all my faults and fears
I found myself in the Hall of Mirrors
I never submitted a piece of poetry before so I thought I might try it out and submit a poem I wrote about self realization. Yesh.
Edit: sorry, just realized a few mistakes cuz I was rushed when I did it. :XD:
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adinablack Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007
Very nice. Favourites :D
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adinablack Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2007
Very nice. Favourites :D
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EternalBombnatioN Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2006
I really loved this poem. This will always be one of my personal favorites. ^.^
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chamzi Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2006
Aww Thank you! I love it too, mostly cuz it really ment something to me when I was writing it. :hug:
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raven-is-my-name-tt Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2005   Writer
Wow...Just wow I really like!!:+fav:
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hatredtheblack Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2005
That's so clever and so expressive! I love it! I really hope to read more of your poetry in the future.
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AnawielDewdrop Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is absolutly beautiful, i love the imagry and you rhmed it well, i admire you for that, i really can't rhyme my stuff. the way you used the tittle in the first and last stanza really brought it full cicle and rounded it up well. you should write poetry more often, you're really good at it
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chamzi Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005
Aw, thanks!
Perhaps one day I shall, but this is only the 3rd poem I'v ever done in my 17 years of life so it maybe very scars when I do submit poetry, but really Thank you!
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AnawielDewdrop Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are very welcome, well done :w00t:
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the-fallen-raven13 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2005
You can draw and write! Way to go chamzi! :thumbsup:
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